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Slide Redesign
03/12/10 | by Troy Chollar ![[mail]](img/envelope.gif)
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| Categories: Portfolio In the original slide there was a nice graphic and the layout was clean and balanced. It did not have bullet points for the text, a small graphic or many other common layout issues.
For the presentation makeover a series of colored and slightly beveled shapes were used throughout. Keeping consistency the text was highlighted on the circle, the demographic image on a rounded corner rectangle and the two connected with the gradient (triangle).
- Troy @ TLC
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Comment from: Tony Osime [Visitor] · http://www.tonyosime.com
Nice makeover.
I feel the age group limit is not given sufficient prominence. I would have a 0-100 Y axis line on the left [same height as the right graphic] with two tick marks representing the 35-55 age group. There would be a similar triangle from inside the tick marks to the (now) central beveled text circle.
The ground shadows do not add much - I would remove them.
The title is too plain for the rest of the slide.
I feel the age group limit is not given sufficient prominence. I would have a 0-100 Y axis line on the left [same height as the right graphic] with two tick marks representing the 35-55 age group. There would be a similar triangle from inside the tick marks to the (now) central beveled text circle.
The ground shadows do not add much - I would remove them.
The title is too plain for the rest of the slide.
04/25/10 @ 10:48
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